Shot list and thriller treatment

Shot list
High Angle Long Shot/Close up:
man walking, checks watch, straightens tie and stops at scheduled spot in train yard.

Mid Shot/Tilt:
man starts to pace and keeps checking watch obviously waiting for someone or something .

Close up/mid shot:
As the time passes his nerves begin to show resulting in him breaking down into a sweat (forehead).

Mid Shot:
Second person appears at the end of the train yard and slowly walks towards the first man.

Long Shot/Tracking:
A few lines of muffled dialogue are exchanged before they both exit the train yard in the direction the first man entered from.

Long Shot/Mid Shot/Close up/Mid Shot:
The scene changes and the first man is with a woman(the sound of echoed and the picture is distorted/fuzzy) he is walking with her and seems happy.

Close up:
Scene changes again and the first man is in a car with the second man, he is looking increasingly nervous.

Close Up/Long Shot:
Scene changes the man is back with the woman and he is holding a knife and looks upset.

Close Up:
Scene changes and the man is in the car looking scared.

High Angled Mid Shot:
Scene changes once more and the woman is dead with the man standing over her.

Close Up/Tracking:
Finally we see the man once more he has started sobbing, the car comes to a halt, the man waits for man 2 to exit before he slowly exits himself.

Thriller Treatment

Subgenre - for our thriller film we have decided to go with British gangster subgenre, meaning the film will have many cultural references and will portray British themes.

Style - The style of our film will be very dark and confusing, it will be designed to be intimidating to the watcher and will be portrayed from the perspective of a very un-intimidating man who has committed a regrettable crime.

Character - the characters in our thriller focus on the boundaries between the powerful and the weak.
Guy1 - is nervures and uneasy, he is slightly unstable but ultimately weak of mind and body.
Guy2 - is a strong and confident figure, he is an intimidating person and knows how to handle himself in any situation.

Props - the majority of the props will be held by guy1 who will have glasses, cufflinks, and a tie to complement the state he his in.

Costume - guy1 is in a suit it is ruffled and untidy, it is a suit suitable for an office employee and no one of great importance.
Guy2- will be hardly seen but will be dressed in trench coat and will have an intimidating veneer.